ShadenLines's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Hulk Loan Shark]

"Lissen, ya twerp. You owe Big Lou 2,000 plus da points. Now eitha you hand ova some cash or I break ya f***in' leg." ...ohhhh crap.

But seriously, it ain't bad but you might want to spend some time sketching hats. Get some images of fedoras, homborg hats, etc. & move your pencil/stylus/whatever. Look for hats that were in style during the 1920's to 30's if you really want to make it authentic. Also if you make the suit a little bit tighter, it would show his latent power & violence more effectively.

TheMiamiDeSantos responds:

yo thanks for the tips, yeah i should had made the suit tighter that's a good comment indeed, thank you a lot. Also i draw with a mouse

[Odoru - OC of a friend of mine]

So Odoru has green skin, slit pupils, pointy ears & she can fly. Hmm...it would be interesting to see a real-life version of this. What is that strapped to her thigh...a revolver?

TheMiamiDeSantos responds:

yo thanks, well i don't know it looks like those sci-fi space weapons or something, on the original image it looked something like that

[GO ARMY GO]

I like this one. How tall is it, exactly?

The legs on the rats are a bit long...as someone who kept pet rats as a kid, I can tell you that rats have shorter legs & are usually a bit fatter (when they're healthy). OTOH you don't want too much realism in a piece like this. F***ing excellent job on the insane-looking deer skull! Also the rats' fur has good texture.

What would really help here is better presentation. Hang up the drawing so it's straight, tape it down if you must, & take a decent picture with good lighting. Crop out the surroundings & this piece would look better.

...I could almost see this as a back tattoo, for the right person.

snotrat responds:

thanks for the advice! and yeah i noticed the legs were a bit off and now i notice why, as someone who likes drawing rats, thisll help alot. also its cool that you used to keep rats. i would like to keep them some day when im done with school. also the drawing is like around 4 feet tall maybe? idk. but thanks for the comment! unfortunatly its hard to get a decent picture cuz this is the only photo i had of it before it was sprayed with this stuff that makes it so that the charcoal doesnt wear away it made it look faded and a bit worse so id prefer to post this kinda bad photo of it when it was in its best condition

[Dead End]

It's eerie, which is good.

I assume those are zombies in the distance. Walking through a forest at night, probably lost, & arriving at a clearing where zombies are standing around would definitely be an "oh shit" moment.

artoast8p responds:

Your description is spot on! Thanks!

['Long Iron on Her Hip'- Happy Halloween!]

I'd listen to this album, too...once, at least....

But seriously, this ain't bad. I dig the girl's outfit, though the slippers are a bit surreal. (Was that what you were going for? If so, you succeeded!) The revolver reminds me of the Joker's revolver in the first Batman movie.

One question: why is her left foot greenish in color?

Flikki responds:

Yeah, the slippers are there just to make her more goofy. Her foot is green because she's a frankenstein stitched up from different folk.

Thanks for the comment though! It is a good album, definitely worth a second listen to.

[Huntress on the Prowl]

The colors are good; the pose is definitely good..."on the prowl", indeed. But there is only so much you can do on a surface as small as a phone screen. A real sketchbook & pencils, pens, etc. would serve you far better. The grass & trees could stand to be more plantlike. Anyway, she's hot for a furry cartoon. ;-)

Flikki responds:

Yeah, the phone screen is rather limiting, but it's nice for when you're away from the computer and you don't have the sketchbook with you.

Thanks for the comment though! I'll be sure to spend more time with the plants next time.

[Baldric Weathers]

If you haven't heard of him or know who he is, websearch "Ned Kelly". This character reminds me of the armor he fabricated for his armed robberies.

DancwartVonTronje responds:

You are correct. He is indeed based on Ned Kelly, according to Earndil (the player) :3

[Emperor Scrunglus]

Would this be Scrunglus II (of eastern Gaul) or the emperor/philosopher Scrunglus Phallus?...

But seriously, it ain't bad. He looks quite proud of himself, which makes sense.

DancwartVonTronje responds:

You made revisit my history homework >:(

Turns out his full name is "Flavius Pubicus Scrunglus"

https://twitter.com/DucDeVinny/status/1602273835717386241?s=20

[Our Good Pal Mothman]

Is he Mothra's little brother?

(You know someone was gonna ask...)

SourCherryJack responds:

Inquiries into Mothman’s relationship to Mothra remain inconclusive

[Pistol Girl Pinup [2K23]]

Well ain't _this_ a cute little number...

But seriously, the colors pop. Did you mean to make them that bright? They're almost reminiscent of 60's rock concert posters. Kind of odd to pair these bright colors with two pistols but why not? I'm just glad you didn't draw her too skinny...this girl has meat on the right bones. ;)

CobaltRogueX responds:

Thanks!

Yeah, I've been experimenting with a bag of 160 copic markers I recently bought and used mostly pastel pink, lemon, blue, and some light green and purple markers for the background to see what I'd get. Used much darker blues for the girl's shading. I'm just glad my scanner was able to pick everything up!

I'm glad you like it! I was looking at old 60's and 70's pulp paperback paintings and got a little inspired.