ShadenLines's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fury Road [2K24]]

Wonder if a background would add anything to it... But yeah, it's great overall. You caught the savagery.

CobaltRogueX responds:

Thanks! I was mainly using the actual scene as reference and the only background was the sky itself, which wasn't much darker than the light blue I put behind him. I also wonder if it would benefit from aome creative liberties though.

[mindflayer windup animation]

That's quite a fast-draw technique...

I can't help but think that normally, she must be _very_ uncomfortable. Especially when she's sitting down.

snotrat responds:

good thing she floats!

[the volleyball of power]

After reading the caption, the dialogue is less surreal now.

Also, with a title like "the volleyball of power" you could make a great animated clip if you play it right...it would surely have to be A-rated, or at least M.

Maxwell-28 responds:

Nah, there's no need for such a high age range for a death that can easily be censored. For example, the ball could hit the boy while raising a large curtain of sand and, when it comes down, reveal that he has the halo (so he has been killed).

[I'll WHACK ya]

The way she looks, she can whack me anytime she _wants_.

DancwartVonTronje responds:

Famous last words

[artfight pt.1]

Lotsa bright colors... I get the impression you had a good time when you were drawing those.

KhaosKitsune617 responds:

had a very good time.

[Halal and Kosher - Wingman]

I like how Chili Con has thunder thighs...girls like that can be fun.

vonschloss responds:

better believe it

[For @scratcherokay on Scratch]

Guess there won't be any smile from _this_ emoticon...

FunnyPlant responds:

actually this being an emoticon makes a bajillion times more sense

[moon knight]

Interesting... It ain't bad overall. However:

1. The background could use a bit more definition. You could add a bit here & there so it looks like a moonscape.

2. The armor is cool but--I'm not sure how much realism you were going for here--a functional chest plate won't make a pair of boobs pop out. Certainly not the nipples. OTOH if you're going for sex appeal then ignore this comment.

3. I dig the helmet...maybe render the chainmail on the neck a bit looser? Put in a fold or two, so Ms. Moonknight can actually move her head.

Anyway you're off to a good start. Keep it up.

Sirbeartoad responds:

100% agree on all of them now I cant un see the chainmail lol
with the chest plate it was in a one of the refs I found and thought it looked spicy lmao
def need to study Armor more, with the background I just got lazy :a
I really appreciate the feedback :D

[Silent Hill florges]

That's the cutest version of Death I've seen so far...first time I've seen it as a Pokemon, also.

If this creature comes for me on my final day... You did a good job but seriously, this isn't scary at all.

SullyGuille responds:

Yeah I really can't draw scary so I just go for cutesy instead. My kind on death

[Don't say it don't say it don't say it]

And with that, you summoned him into our world...where he can scare the bejesus out of everyone, wreak havoc, & probably abduct some cute young girl to be his bride.

But seriously, it ain't bad. Did you watch any of the old cartoons? There was an animated series going for a while, prior to the Internet Era. Your illo reminds me of it. I can hear his voice inside my head right now. >|-D

SullyGuille responds:

Damn, poor cute young girl. I do have to watch the show, but I got hyperfixated on the musical for a while there and later the movie. Thanks a lot!